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MLP How Not to make a Sue by wthdude1plz MLP How Not to make a Sue by wthdude1plz
NOTE: PLEASE READ ==> Lol. I'm flattered, but I don't have the time, patience, or fortitude to look at your OCs and tell you how to fix them. xD Just read up on the tutorial and compare your OC with what we're saying.

Full view to really be able to read it. VERY TEXT HEAVY.

A collaborative effort between myself and my good friend :icongoldenkitsune-queen:*Goldenkitsune-Queen

This here, boys and girls, is how to make a decent, My Little Pony OC, while keeping away from the things that make them total Marysues. We see far too many examples of just plain BAD characters, and so, we made this. Use the information here as a sort of guideline when creating your OC.

I know it's very text heavy, but the info is good and something to really keep in mind when making your OC.

I did most of the writing, with a few pointers and much help from *Goldenkitsune-Queen and a few others in the :iconmlpfim-crystalview: group I run.

:icongoldenkitsune-queen:*Goldenkitsune-Queen is responsible for the wonderful illustrations and, again, a big help on the text based content as well.

Special thanks to :iconkuurokaze:*Kuurokaze who proof read my giant text wall of typos, misspellings, forgotten words, and generally badly written mess. <33
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Emmathehero737 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
totally going to make an oc that has everything you tell people not to do xD
FoxesPaintbrush Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
This is very useful... :happy: 
puglover3000 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Yeah, I totally have to fix up my OC. heh heh...
ScarletandLunaRcool Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My OC basically passes. Only the 'friends with main cast' part.....
Frost-FyrePon3 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
My Oc is on/of of Pegasus and alicorn. (She is supposed to be one of twilights future students of friendship and stuffz :3) Is it alright if I note you her stuff and you reveiw her?
otterboop Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
yay I passed~
KatzillaAdoptables Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Lol the end part made me giggle :D I go on a lot of roleplay communities and see a lot of godmodding stuff. 
KrazyKitty11 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my god. "...And I'm not a godmodding douche!" That is so perfect :XD:
valentinefantasy Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
grapeford.... ;___;
NyxianDragoness Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pfft, that last panel-y thing~
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